I am Learning to add Detail to my Writing.

Room 8 has been learning how to add detail into our writing to make it more interesting. We can think about the questions: Who? What? Where? When? How? and Why? to help us add this detail.

On Friday I was playing Minecraft story mode because it is fun forever. I was at home because I was feeling sick. I felt warm and cosy and sleepy so it was time for bed. I slept on the couch.

My Reflection

I think that I did a good job at writing because my writing was tidy. It was tricky to add detail because it is hard to think of what to write. I am getting better at writing because I practice learning words.